Hi guys... I'm Diana Karen Sánchez Aragón,
I'm 20 years old. I'm from Puebla. I’m studying English language at the Buap.
I’m working in an office supply store; I live with my grandma “Domi” and my
uncle “Rafa”. My Parents are divorced. My mom’s name Paty, she’s 35 years old and
she’s stylist. She lives with my Sisters Sol & Mayte, they’re 14 and 12
years old and study in the middle school.
I like listening music, hanging out with my family and friends, reading books (sometimes), watching movies, singing, cooking and going to concerts. I studied to cook, before to enter at the college.
When I finish the college I’d travel to USA, Brazil, China, and Australian; because I want to know new cultures, people, places, foods. I’ll want to learn more in this course, for that I’ll be a great teacher, and in a future I can to teach other persons. That’s all.
Thanks!!!!
Hi! Karen, I read your writing and I can see that you have some problems, for example when you wrote "I studied to cook" I think the correct form is "I studied cooking", you forgot the future "will" or "going to" when you wrote "When I finish the college" and finally you have to recall that you must not put contractions in a formal writing. It is a good job but you should check those mistakes. ;)
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